【2014普陀二模】上海市普陀区2014届高三下学期质量调研(二模)考试英语4.??????

Translation

Directions:  Translate the following sentences into English, using the words given in the brackets.

1.          考官将会问你几个关于科技发展的问题。(related)

2.          他在英语学习方面取得了比其他同学更大的进步。(than…)

3.          就你的观点,缺少均衡饮食以及室外运动会有怎样的负面结果?(consequence)

4.          在未来几周内,这些学校将要安装网络设备为了方便学生获取所需信息。(install)

5.          韩国影星在女学生中大受欢迎,很多人为了见上一面甚至愿意在机场等上几小时,这却让父母们很担忧。(So…)

答案解析:
答案及解析:

知识点:翻译

1. 考官将会问你几个关于科技发展的问题。(related)

The judges/ interviewers will ask you several questions related to the development of science and technology.

评分标准,满分4分:

The judges/ interviewers (0.5+0.5) will ask you several questions (0.5+0.5) related to (1) the development of science and technology (0.5+0.5).

1. judges/ interviewers前没有添加定冠词,扣0.5

2. science and technology两者漏翻其一,均扣0.5

 

2. 他在英语学习方面取得了比其他同学更大的进步。(than…)

He has made more progress than other students in English learning.

评分标准,满分4分:

He has made more progress (1+1) than other students (1) in English learning(1).

1. make progress时态用错、比较级漏翻扣1分,progress错用复数形式扣0.5

2. other students错用限定词,扣0.5

3. in English learning错用介词,扣0.5

 

3. 就你的观点,缺少均衡饮食以及室外运动会有怎样的负面结果?(consequence)

From your point of view, what are the negative consequences of lacking balanced diets or outdoor activities?

评分标准,满分4分:

From your point of view (1), what are the negative consequences of (1) lacking (1) balanced diets or outdoor activities(1)?

1. “就你的观点也可以翻译为:As far as you are concerned,…

2. “负面结果也可以翻译为:negative results

 

 

 

4. 在未来几周内,这些学校将要安装网络设备为了方便学生获取所需信息。(install)

In the coming weeks, the schools will be installed with network devices/ equipment to make it convenient for students to get the information needed.

评分标准,满分5分:

In the coming weeks(0.5+0.5), the schools will be installed with(0.5+0.5) network devices/ equipment(1) to make it convenient for students(1) to get the information needed(0.5+0.5).

1. the schools will install network device也得分,即install主动、被动都得分

2. the schools限定词不能缺失,否则扣0.5

3. equipment不可数名词,错误扣0.5

 

5. 韩国影星在女学生中大受欢迎,很多人为了见上一面甚至愿意在机场等上几小时,这却让父母们很担忧。(So…)

So popular are the Korean stars among the girl students that some are even willing to wait at the airport for hours just to have a look, which makes their parents feel worried.

评分标准,满分5分:

So popular are the Korean stars(0.5+0.5) among the girl students(0.5) that some are even willing to (1) wait at the airport for hours(0.5+0.5) just to have a look(0.5), which makes their parents feel worried(1).

1. 倒装句翻译错误或缺失,或没有翻译so…that…结构,均扣1

1.       2. “这却让父母们很担忧根据语义翻译正确即得分

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