2016年高考英语原创冲刺卷03(四川卷)

Do you want to improve the way you study? Do you feel nervous before a test? Many students say that a lack of concentration is their biggest problem. It seriously affects their ability to study, so do their test results. If so, use these tips to help you.

Study Techniques

l         You should always study in the same place. You shouldn’t sit in a position that you use for another purpose. For example, when you sit on a sofa to study, your brain will think it is time to relax. Don’t watch TV while you are studying. Experts warn that your concentration may be reduced by 50 percent if you attempt to study in this way. Always try to have a white wall in front of you, so there is nothing to distract (make less concentrated) you. Before sitting down to study, gather together all the equipment you need. Apart from your textbooks, pens, pencils and knives, make sure you have a dictionary. If your study desk or table is needed when you are not studying, store all your equipment in a box beside it.

l         Your eyes will become tired if you try to read a text which is on a flat surface. Position your book at an angle of 30 degrees.

l         Be realistic and don’t try to complete too much in one study period. Finish one thing before beginning another. If you need a break, get up and walk around for a few minutes, but try not to telephone a friend or have something to eat.

Test-taking Skills

l         All your hard work will be for nothing if you are too nervous to take your test. Getting plenty of rest is very important. This means: do not study all night before your test! It is a better idea to have a long-term study plan. Try to make a timetable for your study which lasts for a few months.

l         Exercise is a great way to reduce pressure. Doing some form of exercise every day will also improve your concentration. Eat healthy food, too.

l         When you arrive in the examination room, find your seat and sit down. Breathe slowly and deeply. Check the time on the clock during the test, but not too often. Above all, take no notice of everyone else and give the test paper your undivided attention.

21. Which of the following statements is true according to the passage?

              A. Check the time during the exam at a certain time.

              B. Your concentration will improve if you study and watch TV at the same time.

              C. You should study in a different place every day, so you don’t get bored.

D. Staying up all night and studying is tiring, but you will learn a lot using this method.

22. What does the underlined word “it” refer to?

              A. Your textbook.             B. Your study desk or table.             

C. Your dictionary.                       D. The equipment you need.

23. What can be inferred from the passage?

              A. You shouldn’t look at everyone else during the test.

B. You’ll concentrate more if there is nothing to distract you.

C. You will have enough energy to deal with your study and exams by eating healthy diet.             

D. If you feel tired during study, you can walk around for a few minutes.

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知识点:教育类

ABC

本文叙述了日常学习和参加考试的一些实用的技巧帮助学生更好地处理学习和考试。

22. B 猜测词意题。根据本句If your study desk or table is needed when you are not studying, store all your equipment in a box beside it.如果在你不学习的时候,你用来你学习的桌子要被使用,那么就在桌子旁边放一个盒子,把你所用的学习用品都放在盒子里。所以本句中的代词it指代前半句中提到的study desk。故B正确。

23. C 推理判断题。根据倒数第二段最后一句Eat healthy food, too.可知我们要吃就健康的食物保证自己有足够的精力处理学习爱和考试。故C正确。

     

Personality is, to large extent, inherent -- A-type parents usually bring about A-type offspring. But the environment must also have a profound effect, since if competition is important to the parents, it is likely to become a major factor lives of their children.

One place where children soak up A characteristics is school, which is, by its very nature, a highly competitive institution. Too many schools adopt the "win at all costs" moral standard and measure their success by sporting achievements. The current passion for making children compete against their classmates or against the clock produces a two-layer system, in which competitive A types seem in some way better than their B-type fellows. Being too keen to win can have dangerous consequences: remember that Pheidippides,  the first marathon runner, dropped dead seconds after saying,"Rejoice, we conquer!".

By far the worst form of competition in school is the disproportionate emphasis on examinations. It is a rare school that allows pupils to concentrate on those things they do well. The merits of competition by examination are somewhat questionable, but competition in the certain knowledge of failure is positively harmful.

Obviously, it is neither practical nor desirable that all A youngsters change into Bs. The world needs types, and schools have an important duty to try to fit a child's personality to his possible future employment. It is top management.

24. According to the author, what factors contribute to the building of personality?

   A. Inheritance.                      B. environment .

   C. Competition.                     D. inheritance, competition and environment.

25. The phrase "soak up" is closest in meaning to _____.

   A. pull up                             B. take up                                           C. take in                             D. pull in

26. What attitude does the author hold toward examinations in schools?

A. positive                             B. negative                                           C. doubtful                             D. neutral

27. What suggestion does the author make concerning the management of schools?

A. All students be made into competitive A types.

B. A child's personality be considered in regard to his possible future job.

C. All students be changed into B characteristics.

D. Schools abolish all forms of examinations.

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知识点:教育类

DCCB

本文讲述了性格形成的影响因素,学校对学生性格的形成有很大的作用,此外作者给学校管理提出了一些建议。

25.C词义猜测题。根据第二段的描述,可知第一句的含义是让孩子吸收A型性格的一个地方是学校。故划线的短语是吸收的意思,故选C

26.C观点态度题。根据第三段The merits of competition by examination are somewhat questionable,(通过考试来竞争这种做法的好处本身有点值得怀疑),可知作者对于考试是持怀疑态度的。A.积极的;B.消极的;C.怀疑的;D.中立的。故选C

     

    Gabby Logan was a gymnast when she was young. She is now the 39-year-old mother of seven-year-old twins, Reuben and Lois. The other day on TV she was dressed in a new swimsuit, which was designed to show off her nice figure, which was admired by a great number of television viewers.

   Gabby, who won high praise for her television show of the Olympics, has asked the woman of the whole nation to go to the swimming pool, saying the secret of her figure is regular swimming. She is also making advertisements for the new Sculpture Swimwear of Speedo, an international swimsuit company, to help women find the perfect swimsuit.

   Gabby said, "We all felt uneasy about getting into our swimwear at first. But we should be excited by the sporting achievements we have seen at the Olympics this summer. To get ourselves a little healthier, have a try and go to the swimming pool. " Then she said," Swimming is the perfect exercise if you want to feel healthy or simply relax. I find that going for a swim always clears my mind and also gives me some valuable 6 my time'. I like the calm of swimming which I can't experience when I am not in the pool. "

   A study by Speedo, an International company, which sells swimsuits, reported the biggest reason why women were put off going to the pool was the way they looked in swimwear. More than half of the l,000 women surveyed have been reduced to tears when trying on swimwear. And 48 percent said they felt too self-conscious to go swimming with their children. Sally Polak, from Speedo, said, " We're hoping to give women the courage and confidence to get back into the water. "

28.What can we learn about Gabby Logan?

A. She has two children of the same age.   

B. She appeared on TV to show off her nice figure.

C. She was a swimmer when she was young.  

D. She took part in the Olympic Games when she was young.

29.What is the main reason why Gabby has a nice figure?

A. She is a gymnast.         B. She often swims.   

C. She has a peaceful mind    D. She wears Sculpture Swimwear.

30.The biggest reason why most women were stopped from swimming is _    .

A. their shy mind of wearing the swimsuit     

B. their being too busy with their housework

C. their not being comfortable in the swimsuit  

D. their being afraid of their child seeing them wear less

31. What is the author's purpose of writing the text?

A. To introduce a famous woman.             B. To discuss a TV show of the Olympics.

C. To report a way of keeping a good figure.     D. To encourage women to go swimming.

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知识点:健康保健类

ABAD

通过Gabby Logan的亲身事例告诉了我们游泳对体形、健康的重要作用。鼓励妇女们克服害羞心理重返泳池。

28. A细节推理题。根据第一段She is now the 39-year-old mother of seven-year-old twins, Reuben and Lois.可知她有一对7岁的双胞胎孩子,A正确;根据Gabby Logan was a gymnast when she was young. The other day on TV she was dressed in a new swimsuitGabby, who won high praise for her television show of the Olympics可知其他项错误,故选A.

29.B推理判断题。根据第二段Gabby, who won high praise for her television show of the Olympics, has asked the woman of the whole nation to go to the swimming pool, saying the secret of her figure is regular swimming.可知她身材好是因为经常去游泳,故选B.

31.D推理判断题。第二段Gabby, who won high praise for her television show of the Olympics, has asked the woman of the whole nation to go to the swimming pool, saying the secret of her figure is regular swimming.讲了游泳对塑造体形的重要性;第三段Swimming is the perfect exercise if you want to feel healthy or simply relax. I find that going for a swim always clears my mind and also gives me some valuable 6 my time'.讲了游泳的好处。最后一句We're hoping to give women the courage and confidence to get back into the water. "鼓励妇女去游泳。故选D.

     

   As the capital of China's Shaanxi Province, Xi'an's long history was properly summed up by our English-speaking guide: "If Xi'an is the grandmother of cities, Beijing is a youth and Shanghai is just a baby in the womb. "

   However, it was not until 1974, following the chance discovery of the Army of Terracotta Warriors by well-digging farmers, that Xi'an was once again pushed onto the international map. Three decades later, the local government is pouring funds into the tourism sector. Ancient monuments and museums are being restored, and various copies of Buddhist and Tang heritage are being constructed to help Chinese tourists rediscover their national heritage.

   One of those ancient monuments is the Big Wild Goose Pagoda-Xi'an's most sacred (神圣的) monument-which was built in 652 by the monk Xuanzang ,who travelled across India for 18 years and returned with a precious collection of Buddhist sacred texts. In 1966,the Red Guards burnt the pagoda's scriptures, silk wall hangings and other relics in a bonfire that raged all night. But that destruction has largely been forgotten as tourists flock to the newly restored pagoda. The only original remainders-the empty shell of the seven-storey pagoda-light up at night, standing out in the city's skyline.

   Xi'an is also displaying the glories of the ancient Tang Dynasty, with a 165-acre Tang Paradise Theme Park that is visited by flocks of tourist groups. Although every bit of this Tang heritage is recreated, it is artistically pleasing, landscaped with ponds and lakes, classical gardens, bridges, palaces and pavilions. Explore the vast area on a golf cart, hopping on and off to see shortened operas from the Tang Dynasty days, laser shows on the lake, highly structured man-made waterfalls, as well as murals and statues of historical figures ,philosophers and poets.

   A 36km drive northeast takes you to Xi'an's most famous attraction, the Army of Terracotta Warriors. They were made to order in 221BC by the first emperor of China, Qin Shi Huangdi, who used the forced labour of 700,000 subjects to create a mausoleum(陵庙) guarded by an entire army.

32. From the passage we can learn that a large sum of money of the local government in Xi'an is being ploughed into         .

A. restoring the monuments     B. restoring the Pagoda

C. tourism industry            D. exploring the history

33.How many historical sites in Xi'an have been referred to in the passage?

A. Three.       B. Four.           C. One.            D. Six.

34.What can we learn from the fourth paragraph about the Tang Paradise Theme Park?

A. Visitors are pleased with the survivals from the Tang Dynasty.

B. The natural waterfalls in it are very attractive.

C. It is totally recreated but is artistically pleasant.

D. Visitors can appreciate the full Tang Dynasty operas.

35.Which of the following can be the best title for the text?

A. Make a visit to ancient sites at once.          B. China's ancient capital rises again.

C. Travel to the Army of Terracotta Warriors.     D. Take a view in the modern city.

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知识点:政治经济文化类阅读

CACB

文章通过对秦兵马俑、大雁塔、唐代主题公园的描述,向我们介绍了西安的古建筑古文化。

32.C细节推理题。根据第二段Three decades later, the local government is pouring funds into the tourism sector. Ancient monuments and museums are being restored, and various copies of Buddhist and Tang heritage are being constructed to help Chinese tourists rediscover their national heritage.可知西安政府把大量资金投资于旅游业,重修古建筑。故选C.

33.A细节推理题。文章涉及the Army of Terracotta Warriors(秦兵马俑)the Big Wild Goose Pagoda(大雁塔)和Tang Paradise Theme Park(唐代主题公园)三个古文化遗址,故选A.

35.B推理判断题。文章在介绍西安的古建筑古文化不是做广告,A错误;C项只是古建筑之一,不全面不能作为标题;介绍西安的古建筑古文化,D项中的modern city不符;根据第二段中that Xi'an was once again pushed onto the international map.可知是讲西安的再崛起,能概括全文适合做标题,故选B.

     

Things to Remember When You’re Having a Bad Day

Even the hardest days contain lessons that will help you be a better person. Feeling down? Consider these things to remember when you’re having a bad day.

l         No one promised life would be perfect.

        36    Don’t base your happiness on meeting every expectation you set for yourself. It is good to be ambitious, but you’ll never be perfect. If you expect otherwise, your life will be filled with disappointments.

l            37   

Trees that are slow to grow bear the best fruit. Don’t kid yourself into thinking success will come quickly. It isn’t easy to be patient, but anything worth doing requires time.    38    . 

l         Without hard times, you wouldn’t appreciate the good ones.

Strength does not come from winning. Your struggles develop your strengths. When you go through hardships and decide not to give up, that is strength.    39     . It is hard to find much to smile about when you fail, but how else would you improve yourself? If you look at failures as a part of your growing process, you’ll stay positive and follow your goals for as long as it takes.

l         It’s OK to cry sometimes.

Do not apologize for crying. Without this feeling, we are only robots. Don’t be afraid of crying.    40      Instead, it is an acceptable way to let go of your depressed feelings. If you let those feelings build up without release, you’ll have a much harder time dealing with them later. 

A. Don’t get sad if you lose.

B. It isn’t a sign of weakness.

C. Success doesn’t happen overnight.

D. It’s not OK to worry now and then.

E. Don’t compare your life with others’.

F. Remember: Rome was not built in a day.

G. If you look for perfection, you’ll never be content.   

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知识点:七选五

36-40 GCFAB

37. C 根据本段第一句Trees that are slow to grow bear the best fruit.长得慢的树才能结出最好的果实。作者告诉我们遇见不好的事情时要有耐心。选项中只有C“Success doesn’t happen overnight. 成功不会在一夜之间发生与本段中心句一致。

     

Third Culture Kids

   As more cities and companies become increasing international, there is a growing number of children that are creating their own sub-culture. Often   41  to as TCKs (Third Culture Kids) or Global Nomads, these students have a(n)   42  impact on the global community.

So who are these Third Culture Kids? They are not a new phenomenon. As one looks   43   history, there is a realization that certain groups of people have led highly   44  lives, a key   45  in describing TCKs. They often   46  their parents into another country and spend a significant part of his or her development years outside the parents’ culture. They are   47  to new cultures and to other people in the community who   48  move constantly. Their numbers   49  into the hundreds of thousands and are increasing. Ease of 50 and constant relocation of people through multinational companies and global business links contribute to this   51 .

The question “Who am I?” is frequently asked by TCKs. They have   52   a host of cultural identities, and have built relationships to all the cultures,   53   not having full ownership of any. Although elements from each culture are absorbed into TCK’s life experience, the sense of   54   is in relationship to others of a similar background.  

   As you enter into the world of TCKs, one might suspect they are no   55   . But it is   56  , after spending only a short time with them, that they bring a deep knowledge from inside and a special ability to compare   57  and local issues. They represent many countries and cultures. They are the future cross-culturalists and   58  future politicians, diplomats, government employees and educators. They certainly experience a different lifestyle compared to their mono-cultural peers but we can benefit from their global and   59  lives. So, whatever one chooses to label the international students as ---TCKs, Global Nomads, or Global Souls ---we will gain unbelievable   60 ____.

41. A. referred         B. appealed                                C. subscribed                                          D. submitted

42. A. initial           B. temporary                      C. immediate                                          D. tremendous

43. A. down on                            B. back on           C. up to                                                        D. forward to             

44. A. adventurous                   B. mobile                                C. civilized                                          D. primitive

45. A. figure           B. reason                                C. cause                                                        D. factor

46. A. drive                                          B. divide                                  C. accompany                                D. invite

47. A. connected                    B. addicted                                C. exposed                                          D. committed

48. A. frequently                            B. also                                              C. rarely                                                        D. altogether

49. A. change          B. burst                                              C. break                                                        D. extend

50. A. communication   B. travel                                    C. interaction                                D. export

51. A. tradition                            B. shift                                              C. option                                              D. trend

52. A. revealed                            B. discovered                                C. accumulated                     D. accelerated

53. A. as                                                        B. so                                              C. when                                                        D. while

54. A. belonging                            B. achievement                  C. possessing                                          D. responsibility

55. A. exception                            B. denying                                C. doubtful                                          D. different

56. A. clear                                 B. vital                                              C. universal                                          D. essential

57. A. international                   B. updated                                C. complicated                            D. specific

58. A. luckily                                          B. necessarily                  C. hopefully                                          D. generally

59. A. professional                   B. spiritual                                C. material                                          D. color1ful

60. A. awards                                 B. rewards                                C. popularity                                          D. success

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知识点:完型填空

41-45 ADBBD 46-50 CCBDB 51-55 DCCAD 56-60 AACAB

试题分析:本文说明的是现代社会中存在的第三文化小孩,他们随着父母亲迁移到世界各地,了解了不同的文化,也受到不同的文化的影响,形成了不同的性格特征和看待事物的方法。

41. A 考查动词短语辨析。短语refer to提到,指,涉及;appeal to呼吁,吸引;subscribe to订阅;submit to顺从,递交;随着更多的城市和公司越来越国际化,有一些孩子形成了自己的文化。他们被称之为第三文化小孩,他们对全球社会有巨大的影响。从语义来说A正确。

44. B 考查上下文串联。根据46空所在句说明很多人都随着父母亲搬来搬去,过着动荡的生活。这些人在历史上也是很多的。故B正确。

45. D 考查名词辨析。名词figure数据,身材;;reason原因;cause起因;factor因素,元素;动荡的生活是描述第三文化小孩的一个重要元素。因为这些孩子就随着他们的父母亲一直在搬迁。故D正确。

46. C 考查动词辨析。动词drive驾驶;divide区分;accompany陪伴;invite邀请;这些孩子陪着他们的父母亲到另外一个国家并在父母的文化之外度过人生的重要的发展阶段。ABD三项与文章无关。

47. C 考查固定搭配。A项不和介词to连用。短语be addicted to沉溺于;be exposed to接触;be committed to致力于;因为他们随着父母亲到另外一个国家,就接触了另外一种文并接触了另外一些同样一直在搬来搬去的人。故C正确。

48. B 考查上下文串联。根据横线后的move constantly一直在移动。说明这些人和他们一样,所以使用副词also“说明两者之间存在相似的情况。

49. D 考查动词辨析。动词change改变;burst突然爆发;break打断;extend延伸,扩大;本句表示这些人的数量一直在扩大,与后半句的are increasing相一致。故D正确。

50. B 考查上下文串联。这些孩子一直都处于不断的移动之中,所以使用travel与上文一致。

51. D 考查上下文串联。根据文章第一句As more cities and companies become increasing international, there is a growing number of children that are creating their own sub-culture.可知越来越多的孩子成为第三文化孩子是一种趋势。故D正确。

52. C 考查动词辨析。动词reveal显露;discover发现;accumulate积累;accelerate加速;这些孩子经常会没有归宿感。所以才经常会问:我是谁?他们已经积累了很多的文化身份,他们已经很很多文化都建立了联系。故C正确。

53. C 考查连词。本句中when引导主语从句,表示尽管他们和很多文化都有联系,但他们并没有完全拥有任何一种文化。故C正确。

54. A 考查上下文串联。从上文可知这些孩子一直随着父母亲在迁移,所以孩子们对一种文化没有归宿感。故A正确。

57. A 考查形容词辨析。形容词international国际的;updated更新的;complicated复杂的;specific详细的,具体的;这些见多识广的孩子会有一种特殊的能力比较国际和当地的事务。本句在说明这一类孩子的不同之处。

58. C 考查副词辨析。副词luckily幸运地;necessarily必要地;hopefully有希望地;generally一般地;通常地;正是因为他们去过很多对方,所以他们的视角很开阔,很有希望成为未来的跨文化的学家,也很有希望成为未来的政治家等。故C正确。

59. A 考查形容词辨析。形容词professional专业的,职业的;spiritual精神的;material物质的;color1ful五颜六色的;这些孩子和其他的同龄人有很大的不同,看待事物的方法和普通的孩子完全不一样,我们也可以从他们全球性的职业的生活中得到好处。故A正确。

60. B 考查名词辨析。名词award奖;reward报酬,酬劳;popularity流行,受欢迎;success成功;无论我们给这些孩子贴上什么样的标签,我们都可以获得难以置信的回报。因为这些孩子是我们的财富。

     

    A great man died today. He wasn't a world leader or a big figure. He was one of the  61   (great) men who ever lived. He was Joy's father. I guess you might say he was a person   62   was never interested in getting credit or    63  ( receive) honors. He did tiny things like paying his bills on time, going to church on Sunday and serving as an officer in the P.T.A. He 64 (help) his kids with their homework and drove his wife to do the grocery shopping on Thursday    65   (night). He got a great kick out of taking his teenagers and their friends to and  66  football games.

Tonight is Joy's first night  67  him. He doesn't know what to do with    68 (he). He's thankful that God let him have his father for 15 years. That wonderful man died 69  (peace) with a smile on his face and fulfillment in his heart. He knew that he was a great success as a husband and a father, a brother ,a son   70   a friend .

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知识点:语法填空

61. greatest 62. who 63.receiving 64.helped 65.nights

66.from 67.without 68.himself 69.peacefully 70.and

63. receiving.考查动词。句中interested in中的in是介词后加动词的-ing形式,or是连词空白处和getting并列,故填receiving.

64. helped.考查动词时态。文章描述过去发生的事,全文用的是过去时态,故填helped.

65.nights.考查名词。night是可数名词,此处指每周四晚上去购物,night用复数,故填nights.

66.from. 考查介词。此处是take totake from短语,指他带着孩子们和朋友们去痛快地踢球然后再带他们离开。故填from.

67.without.考查介词。句意:今晚是父亲离开Joy的第一个晚上。表示没有用介词without.

68.himself.考查代词。此处指Joy不知道自己该怎么办。根据句意填himself.

69.peacefully.考查副词。句意:这个极好的人脸上带着微笑内心充满满足平静地去了。此处修饰动词died要用副词,故填peacefully.

70.and.考查连词。句意:Joy知道父亲是一个成功的丈夫、父亲、兄长、儿子和朋友。此处a husband and a father, a brother ,a son ,a friend .是并列关系,故填and.

     

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As it is known to us, fewer and fewer students do sports regularly, what makes them weak and easily tired. There are many reasons about this. First of all, some of the students complained that they have too many homework, resulting in less time to take exercise. Beside, some of them think that it is very difficulty for them to keep doing exercise, because it is a very hard thing.

Because lack of physical activities, many students are in poor health. I suggest that our school must take measures to encourage more students to take part in sports. For us students, no matter what busy we are, it is necessary to spare some time to do exercise.

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知识点:短文改错

As it is known to us, fewer and fewer students do sports regularly, what makes them weak and

It which

easily tired. There are many reasons about this. First of all, some of the students complained that

for complain

they have too many homework, resulting in less time to take exercise. Beside, some of them think

much Besides

that it is very difficulty for them to keep doing exercise, because it is a very hard thing.

difficult

Because lack of physical activities, many students are in poor health. I suggest that our

of

school must take measures to encourage more students to take part in sports. For us students, no

should must

matter what busy we are, it is necessary to spare some time to do exercise.

how

3. about改为for 考查介词固定搭配。名词reason通常都只能和介词for连用,形成the reason for...“...的原因

4. complained改为complain 考查时态。本句叙述的是现在存在的学生运动越来越少的社会现象,全文都使用一般现在时,所以本句也应该使用一般现在时的时态。

5. many改为much 考查形容词。本句中名词homework家庭作业,是一个不可数名词,而many修饰可数名词复数形式,所以要使用much修饰不可数名词。

6. Beside改为Besides 考查副词。副词besides而且,表示上下文的递进关系,而beside是介词,表示...旁边后面要接宾语。

7. difficulty改为difficult 考查形容词。本句中形容词difficult在句中和系动词is构成系表结构,而difficult是名词。一些学生认为锻炼对他们来说很困难。

     

假设你是中学生李华,你买了一本英文词典,收到后发现一些质量问题,请给书店经理用英语写一封电子邮件,说明情况和自己的要求。要点如下:

1.     购买的细节;2.发现的问题;3.阐述你的要求(退款或换货)。

2.     注意:1.词数100左右;2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

3.参考词汇:印刷错误 misprint (n.)

Dear Manager,

     I’m writing to tell you something that happened to me. ____________________________                                                                             _________________________________________________________________

Yours,     

Li Hua

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答案及解析:

知识点:书面表达

Dear Manager,

I’m writing to tell you something that happened to me.

Last week I bought an English dictionary from your online bookstore because I am in great need of such a dictionary to help me with my English study. It costs me 25 dollars. But unfortunately when it reached me, I found it very unsatisfactory. There are quite a few misprints and some of the pages are even missing!

As far as I am concerned, I’d like my money back or at least you can change this dictionary for another copy! Personally you should have checked the dictionary to make sure that the dictionary is of high quality before you delivered to customers. I do hope your service can improve from now on.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

名师点睛本篇范文短小精悍,要点全面,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者就开门见山地描述了自己遭遇的问题,买到的书中误印和漏页的问题,在文中作者用到了短语in great need of , As far as I am concerned等介词短语,避免了文章句式的单一。此外,还用到了宾语从句that the dictionary is of high quality before you delivered to customers.状语从句because I am in great need of such a dictionary to help me with my English studywhen it reached me等。